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	<title>Comments on: Direct Address in a Query</title>
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		<title>By: Tweets that mention Kidlit.com · Direct Address in a Query -- Topsy.com</title>
		<link>http://kidlit.com/2009/09/27/dear-queriers-part-2/comment-page-1/#comment-12186</link>
		<dc:creator>Tweets that mention Kidlit.com · Direct Address in a Query -- Topsy.com</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Dec 2010 14:25:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] This post was mentioned on Twitter by Mary Kole and Tracy Clark, Bridgette Booth. Bridgette Booth said: RT @Kid_Lit: From the archives: The query pet peeve of direct address http://ow.ly/tBmB #writing #kidlit #fb [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] This post was mentioned on Twitter by Mary Kole and Tracy Clark, Bridgette Booth. Bridgette Booth said: RT @Kid_Lit: From the archives: The query pet peeve of direct address <a href="http://ow.ly/tBmB" rel="nofollow">http://ow.ly/tBmB</a> #writing #kidlit #fb [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Mary</title>
		<link>http://kidlit.com/2009/09/27/dear-queriers-part-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1159</link>
		<dc:creator>Mary</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 18 Oct 2009 01:28:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Beth -- Very good point. Of course, if the book is written in second person and that&#039;s something interesting that I want to look into, I&#039;ll keep reading. But this is a 2nd person lead to a query for a book that is written in first or third person. I have yet to see a book written in 2nd person, with this query lead or without.

Once I see some premise -- if I even suspect that it must be The Book -- I will overcome any number of pet peeves and personal annoyances. I should probably make this clear in a post at some point or another.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Beth &#8212; Very good point. Of course, if the book is written in second person and that&#8217;s something interesting that I want to look into, I&#8217;ll keep reading. But this is a 2nd person lead to a query for a book that is written in first or third person. I have yet to see a book written in 2nd person, with this query lead or without.</p>
<p>Once I see some premise &#8212; if I even suspect that it must be The Book &#8212; I will overcome any number of pet peeves and personal annoyances. I should probably make this clear in a post at some point or another.</p>
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		<title>By: Beth Browne</title>
		<link>http://kidlit.com/2009/09/27/dear-queriers-part-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1157</link>
		<dc:creator>Beth Browne</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 18 Oct 2009 01:23:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Mary,

It certainly sounds like a very frustrating trend for you to deal with.  But what if the *book* is written in second person?  I thought the query was supposed to give you a feel for the writing in the book?  Obviously, this is not your thing, but might it be someone else&#039;s?  (I know, hard to imagine, right?)  And hey, on the up side, you need read no further (and waste your time) on this particular book or author.

Btw, I am really enjoying your site.  Thanks!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Mary,</p>
<p>It certainly sounds like a very frustrating trend for you to deal with.  But what if the *book* is written in second person?  I thought the query was supposed to give you a feel for the writing in the book?  Obviously, this is not your thing, but might it be someone else&#8217;s?  (I know, hard to imagine, right?)  And hey, on the up side, you need read no further (and waste your time) on this particular book or author.</p>
<p>Btw, I am really enjoying your site.  Thanks!</p>
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		<title>By: ChristaCarol</title>
		<link>http://kidlit.com/2009/09/27/dear-queriers-part-2/comment-page-1/#comment-941</link>
		<dc:creator>ChristaCarol</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Oct 2009 02:33:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You&#039;re probably not too far off in your guessing (if you&#039;re getting in a handful that are like this) that someone somewhere on a blog out there said this was a great idea. Who knows! But now the news can be spread to counter it. Great blog, by the way, just found it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You&#8217;re probably not too far off in your guessing (if you&#8217;re getting in a handful that are like this) that someone somewhere on a blog out there said this was a great idea. Who knows! But now the news can be spread to counter it. Great blog, by the way, just found it.</p>
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