I received a question the other day (thanks, Kate!) about picture book author notes and backmatter, and an author notes example in manuscripts. Great stuff. Let me give you some information on the topic so that you can move more confidently forward with your picture book submissions.
When and Why to Use Picture Book Author Notes in Nonfiction
First of all, you see author notes more frequently in nonfiction work. After the topic is covered in the manuscript, it’s widely accepted to hear from the author (limited to about a page, with text that’s not too dense). The purpose is to add a few interesting tidbits that maybe didn’t fit into the actual narrative (maybe you’re covering a certain period in history with the text, and want to add some “footnotes” of what we’ve learned about that period since), or to personalize the subject.
Authors will often speak to why they gravitated to a particular subject or why they find it particularly fascinating. You shouldn’t style it as a diary entry, but as long as you can keep up the same tone and level of interesting content, you can take a more personal approach. The tone is friendly and engaging.
Author Notes Example in Fiction and Creative Nonfiction
For nonfiction/fiction hybrid and straight-up fiction manuscripts, where there’s a nonfiction subject but it’s fictionalized or the project deals with a nonfiction principle applied to a more artistic main text, the author note switches function. (More advice on creative nonfiction and nonfiction picture books.)
If your project, is, for example, a fictionalized account of a historical figure or a purely fiction story whose plot has a lot to do with the life-cycle of Monarch butterflies, for example, you want to use the author note as a teaching tool, to provide concrete information. The text is all about Bonnie observing the Monarch life-cycle, but the author note sums it up with additional facts that would’ve weighed down the text itself. In this picture book author notes example, the tone is more academic.
How Long Should Your Picture Book Author Notes Be
So what kind of author note do you have on your hands? Are you “softening” a nonfiction text or are you adding factual scaffolding to a fiction or fictionalized text? For the former, you’ll want to keep your author note brief. If your text is 2,000 words, 250 additional words wouldn’t be uncalled for, or an eighth of your manuscript length. This word count is a good author notes example. (Do note that nonfiction picture book texts tend to run longer than fiction, because it’s understood that there’s more information to communicate and the audience is on the older end of the spectrum.)
If you are working with the former “scaffolding” style of note, 500 additional words, or a quarter of your main text, would be your upper limit.
These are not hard-and-fast guidelines, but more of an exploration of the issue. Use the author note to say enough, but don’t write a second manuscript. If you find there’s a whole lot you want to add in your postscript, maybe there’s a way to revise the main text? Remember, the note shouldn’t do the heavy lifting. The main text has to be the star. (Curious about picture book word length? Read more here.)
How to Mention Picture Book Author Notes In Your Query Letter
As for mentioning the author note in your submission, that’s easy-peasy lemon-squeezy: “The main text of TITLE is X,000 words, with an author note of X words at the end.” Ta-da!
I’ve discussed picture books primarily in this post, but MG and YA novels also have tons of room for an author note. A good author notes example, say, is if your YA is largely inspired by the historical character of Lizzie Borden, feel free to spend even 2,000 words or so on some of the bloody facts of the case, and why your twisted little mind ( 😉 ) decided to use it as inspiration. Word count limits apply less to novel author notes, though you still want to keep them engaging and quick.
Working on picture book nonfiction or fiction with a real world subject? Let me help you hit the appropriate tone, voice, and level of information as your picture book editor.
6 Replies to “Picture Book Author Notes and Backmatter”
Mary – thanks so much for answering my question. Great info here! Just what I was looking for.
How INTERESTING. I’m writing a middle grade novel about what will be very unfamiliar terrain/characters for young readers in our part of the world. Because the plot is peppered with delightfully different and unusual – but real – animals/flora/cultural traditions, I thought of including one or two pieces of art per chapter, inserted in a text page. Also I thought of having a glossary at the end of the book with more general facts about various mentions in the book.
Re artwork: I’m not an artist myself and suspect that I shouldn’t invest in getting the artwork done before submitting and getting a book deal, but I thought I could insert something I’ve found on the internet as a space holder that shows what is intended.
Does any of this sound reasonable? Would love your thoughts.
Replying to JS: unless you are self publishing do not bother to get any artwork done before submitting. Art is handled separately.
Can you tell me what the difference is (if any) between author notes and back matter? Thank you!
Thank you, Kate Harold. I’ve been told this wasn’t acceptable. You’ve given me words(hybrid) and strategies!
I’m preparing for another submission of my manuscript soon. Any chance you’re still available for the next revision?
Great info! Exactly what I needed to know,